Faith?

IM N DA DEVIL'S HOUSE WIT ANGLES SENT 4RM GOD HOLiNESS IN A UNJUSTLY HOME NOW THIS IS ODD IM IN GOD'S H0USE WIT DEVILS SENT 4RM SATIN TRYING 2 GIT 2 MA H0USE BUT IM TIRED 0F WAITING IM WALKING WIT DA DEVIL 0N MA WAST... & A ANGLE 0N MA SHOuLDER WONDERING IF ITS GOD OR SATIN WATCHING OVER... ME, I DONT UNDERSTAND DA SCIENTIFiC RELIGiON THEORY HAVE U EVER WONDEReD IF DA RELIGiON U HAVE IS DA RIGHT 0NE IF RELIGiON WAS A POEM WOULD U WRIGHT ONE I HEARD IT WAS A THIN LINE BETWEEN LUV N HATE I TYPE WITH BOLD CAP LETTERS NOT TO DECLARE HATE BUT TO SHOW THE OUTCOME OF THE TIME I WILL CONTINUE TO WAIT FOR AN ANSWER BECAUSE IM SIT10 HERE 0N TYPING IN MY PHONE, MY OWN POEM QUESTIONINg MY FAITH

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Sue Mason

Date: 7/11/2009 5:07:00 PM

I think questioning is a good and powerful thing. Much better than being a robot only mouthing what isn't your own true belief. This is another great write from you Kareena !! Hope you return soon with more writings.

James Fraser

Date: 6/30/2009 10:10:00 AM

Kool write Kareena>>James

Sandra Hudson

Date: 6/29/2009 6:23:00 PM

All of us have had to make that choice in our lives at one time or another. The fact that at your age you are pondering good verses evil seriously means you are maturing into an adult. Like our faith everything improves when we practice it-AA

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/29/2009 6:10:00 PM

I love controversial writes!!! good work! Kareena! as far as the right religion goes, what matters is trusting in a higher being, for surely such a beautiful person as you Kareena, are Heaven Sent...

Lee Nguyen

Date: 6/29/2009 4:24:00 PM

this is a great write. just the caps completely make the readers feel like your yelling. or is that how u meant to write it? yelling at god or satin. questioning ur faith? regardless this is a great work. ur going under my fav poet (:

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/29/2009 4:20:00 PM

enjoyed the read only small suggest not to cap all letters for think rules here say no caps except your I's maybe even place this into a stanza form thanks also for sharing and for your kind comments about MJ he will be missed keep up the nice work look forward in reading your other poem