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fairytale princess

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fairytale princess

storming this castle
a princess
who wears
the crown 
you reign
in the land
of love
hails beauty

kneeling before you
taking your hand
soft petals
blossom within
deep walls
there's a space
kissing feelings
within this heart
filled with emotion
locked inside

awaiting to embrace
every thought
in a dream
burning hot desires 
only you who hears
the deep whisper
no one but you
hears this 
soul's voice

flying without wings
feelings setting 
into the sunset
as you take
emotions hand
softly so slowly

you are a star
in a distant horizon
stay with me
in this fairytale 
forever is eternal
happy ever after
in you 
my  dream

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  1. Date: 11/13/2013 6:41:00 PM
    An excellent feeling of love, caring, and emotions Loved it>DARLA

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:12:00 PM
    You are an amazing story teller, Liam! I thoroughly enjoyed this romantic fairy tale. Terrific writing, my friend!...Thank you very much for the kind comments, as always. :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 2:12:00 AM
    I really could feel the emotion and sentiment in each word.Dreamy and beautiful.Im sure she ll meet you at the ball : ).Im going to favour this

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 12:06:00 AM
    A wonderful story Liam, as always your words re a treat.....Peter

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:55:00 AM
    - A beautiful and romantic fairy tale - hope you get the princess and half the kingdom. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:41:00 AM
    I love fairytales, Liam! You captured the dreaminess of them so well here! Lovely!