Fairy Tale Christmas Dream

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I am just thinking of you fondly Hoping I bring a smile warmed inside It is windy I must admit to you who bring the sunshine love Being honest I dream of cuddling up to you Trying to visualise a feeling each time I see you my heart stops as you enter Breathtaking beautiful lights up I love holding your hands I feel they fit with mines perfect When I look upon your smile light of One in a thousand angels holding a breathless moment Center stage spotlighting Just In that single second my love for you is sealed Kissed By the beauty of having you sweet Cinderalla holding the glass slipper in my life

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Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 6:26:00 PM

Hi Liam, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/19/2015 8:46:00 AM

Beautiful write, Liam. Very tender and sweet....Romantic and light. These are the writes that I love best.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/19/2015 8:01:00 AM

Hi Liam! Wow! Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet !So wonderful!Just amazing!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/19/2015 7:12:00 AM

A tender, loving poem filled with warm feelings that leave no heart unmoved, dear Liam! Excellent! A seven. Have a superb Christmas!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2015 7:10:00 AM

- Really cute and romantic dreams, Liam - Lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)