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Failure...Ha!

Some crumble at the breath of a wind or sudden drop of rain.Plucking false joys,or snorting ounces of pain.Because of ones dreams no more can see,failure is taken as decree.See in this life you may not know,you win,lose,pass,fail,die..or u chose to grow.So with this most are left bound in the worlds sins,only to stop and think then...Look what ive become take a look at me now,crying and analyzing their life avow.Not knowing what is an obstacle but an excersize,ment to build u stronger as you rise?So as for i myself and me....failure will never be.And why settle for comfort when i am free?So i will fly and defy above every eye,and when it is my time oh...i will shine!Thru every joy and pain my light will be seen.On every mountain top,upon every hillside.And as my light shines through the trees...i will dance!my victorious rhythm upon the clouds of eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 8:38:00 PM
See in this life you may not know,you win,lose,pass,fail,die..or u chose to grow YOU ARE NOW MY FAVORITE I love your work keep writing it inspires me.....
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Date: 6/20/2009 8:48:00 PM
You are wise lady C= admirable; yeip, very few persons consider failure a victory (X-men's Apocalypse does xD); failure and obstacles, pain itself, they all are growth experience as you mentioned, and part of a cycle too; thanks a lot for the experience =)
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Date: 6/10/2009 9:17:00 AM
This Is Beautiful.
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Date: 6/7/2009 6:48:00 AM
Hi Rebecca thanks for your reply and so glad you led me to your writes reading poetry takes me away for while and I really liked this one, best wishes Ann.
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Date: 6/5/2009 7:46:00 AM
Smile~I can see "You Dancing There Now Dear Rebecca!!!:):)~Another wonderful write here, filled with inspiration for others I would say....And, as far as the depths of "Your" writings? All I have seen thus far is "Your Priceless Soul!!!":):)~Smile, keep writing~for "You" shall only get better and better...."Love & Warmth Always To You & Yours, John!!!":):) Smile, Bye ~
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Date: 6/5/2009 7:09:00 AM
Good write! Welcome to the soup! - jeremia
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Date: 6/4/2009 9:56:00 PM
Gallant endeavor ... the heart that never surrenders ... is the heart that will dry others tears. Bravo
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