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Failed Attempt

One Willie went over the wall (to avoid the warden and all) pain quickly arose within prison clothes (razor wire snagged on a ball)

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Paloma P

Date: 10/19/2016 10:01:00 AM

HA HA, oopsie. :) Did that hurt to write it?

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/20/2016 7:22:00 AM

just mental pain:-)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/18/2016 8:39:00 PM

you are hilarious! this cracked me up, john...

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/19/2016 9:00:00 AM

If I can make you laugh, I am very happy! Cheerios ~ j

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 10/18/2016 3:05:00 PM

After reading your cute painful poem that song "Great balls of fire" comes to mind...

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/19/2016 9:00:00 AM

LMAO! Hadn't thought of that:-) Poor Willie. Thanks for visiting Cheryl. Positive thoughts your way today ~ j

Tim Smith

Date: 10/18/2016 12:46:00 PM

Rather one ball than one eye...at least he can see her sweet pie...cherry delight...mouth watering site...enough to make a country boy cry...more coffee

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/19/2016 8:58:00 AM

Oooh... I can see this limrickery sinking into the mud very quickly:-) Good morning my friend in shytownville!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2016 11:52:00 AM

ha ha ha this is so funny John:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 10/19/2016 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Jan, if I can make you giggle my day is complete;-) huggerflitchies ~ j