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Fading Canopies

Canopies did bloom Lady Autumn had her say Winter she invites

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Date: 12/2/2010 2:42:00 PM

I like the idea of canopies. That has a picture appeal. How are you?! Best wishes and regards, Gerard.

Date: 11/22/2010 7:17:00 AM

well this sure paints a pretty picture, James-- love how you say that Autumn invites Winter :)-- nikko :)

Date: 11/21/2010 4:15:00 PM

VEry pretty, James. Nice to see comments from you. Let me see a few more of yours before I go off for the day now!

Date: 11/21/2010 12:07:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and personification to share your thoughts. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Date: 11/20/2010 2:13:00 PM

just like a ticking clock :)

Date: 11/20/2010 11:55:00 AM

A lovely milieu James.. Really enjoyed this hun ;) Wilma

Date: 11/20/2010 10:10:00 AM

Hello James, I love the way you refer to Autumn as "Lady" very elegant Haiku James... As Always, Shar

Date: 11/19/2010 3:06:00 PM

Nice one James..Images you paint so clearly..Michael

Date: 11/19/2010 2:46:00 PM

A lovely picture here, Highlander! I just asked where you were not knowing you'd posted this today! Love, Audrey

Date: 11/19/2010 2:24:00 PM

Sorry, james. I wrote deb's name in my comments

Date: 11/19/2010 2:23:00 PM

You have drawn a lovely personification of Lady Autumn, Deb

Date: 11/18/2010 7:53:00 PM

A wonderful picture painted with so few words. Well done. Lots of Love, ~Misty~

Date: 11/18/2010 4:23:00 PM

Interesting use of personification for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Date: 11/18/2010 3:59:00 PM

Lovely visuals James u have painted with your creative pen tonight.. lovely title as well .. enjoyed .. be blessed this happy day luv..