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I was here once But now I'm one of the forgotten ones I faded away slowly Imperceptibly Like the once vibrant blue of blue jeans The edges frayed as I walked along the road of fleeting popularity I felt my fabric thinning until I became comfortable It made me kinda cool in a way for I was worn almost every day it felt better than okay Paired with shirts and sweaters until a time later other clothes seemed better My holes became too noticeable instead of somewhat perceptible The day came when I was sorta just a bit out of style So you washed and folded me carefully put on me on a shelf After all I was a favourite no one wants to throw a favourite away Right there in the closet I stayed Next to all the pretty new things waiting until the day You might wear me again But somehow like sometimes things just are what they are faded old blue jeans inexplicably disappear If you ever do find them You smile and remember how they made you feel But sadly when you try them on they don't fit anymore...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/3/2016 7:56:00 AM
Richard, this was great, I have some of those jeans, but guess what ripped jeans with holes are in style again, but the fit part is another story, loving this 7 (thanks for spotting the typo on my poem, my eyesight is not good)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2016 3:19:00 PM
Glad to help Constance.
Date: 5/1/2016 11:45:00 PM
I just really love this one Richard:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thanks Jill.;0)
Date: 4/30/2016 8:09:00 PM
Oh Richard, you ended this poem so perfectly! A creative piece that I could totally relate to! #7 ; )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thanks again Connie, hugs Rick.
Date: 4/30/2016 4:37:00 PM
Hi Richard! In your capable hands Clothes & Metaphors combine perfectly! Well done, and congratulations on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul!
Date: 4/30/2016 3:09:00 AM
Best wishes n congratulations for POTD. Very wonderful write. I enjoyed every line. Well penned...........hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thanks and hugs back to you Manmath.
Date: 4/29/2016 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on this POTD! This relatable on a few different levels! Now I want to see if some of my faded jeans fit! Nice write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Walter!;0)
Date: 4/29/2016 7:19:00 PM
Great write Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 7:38:00 PM
Hi James, thanks for the visit.
Date: 4/29/2016 4:16:00 PM
SO happy to see that you are POTD, Richard. :) You deserve it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 7:37:00 PM
It was a nice surprise Eileen.
Date: 4/29/2016 4:13:00 PM
I love your poem, Richard. We can all relate to the clothing, but the metaphors too! Congrats on Poem Of The Day! Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, i', pleased you like my poem.
Date: 4/29/2016 2:38:00 PM
- That is something happening in a magic closets .... :))) .... it has happened to me many times, Richard :))) - Well done and congrats !!! - hugs // Sun :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine!
Date: 4/29/2016 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:19:00 PM
This is a nice surprise! Thanks for reading it.
Date: 4/29/2016 10:58:00 AM
Richard, Congratulations on ur well deserved POTD. Very brilliant write. Well done...........hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:19:00 PM
Hi Manmath, thanks for the congrats.
Date: 4/29/2016 7:39:00 AM
and now I see your jeans earned potd. Excellent, Rick. I knew this one was worthy.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:20:00 PM
You are kind, it is a nice Surprise.
Date: 4/29/2016 7:14:00 AM
Great use of a metaphor - incidentally I have a pair of jeans from when I met my hubby and I still can get into them - a great feeling:-):-) hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2016 2:42:00 PM
- Your wife is too good at making delicious food :)))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:21:00 PM
Good for you, sadly I can't say the same thing. When I met Mary I was 148 lbs now I'm 182 lbs. hugs back to you Jan.
Date: 4/29/2016 6:50:00 AM
Hi Richard: you captured the theme of faded jeans wonderfully.I think the word they use for old clothing nowise VINTAGE.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:22:00 PM
Vintage, much like myself! Thanks for visiting Ralph.
Date: 4/29/2016 6:18:00 AM
Wonderful write Richard congratulations on POTD, well deserved...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Charlie!
Date: 4/28/2016 9:02:00 PM
I LOVE this one, Richard. I had a pair of jeans like this once!!! I put it away and now i can't even find it . I suppose it got trashed but I'd give anything to have it again because it was NOT worn out. it was vintage 1970's bell bottoms and would be so cool to use in programs that my ESL students put on when we study fashions of the past. Anyway, one of the best poems i read today.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2016 1:25:00 PM
You are sweet, thanks Andrea. I too had bell bottoms and mine had a button fly.
Date: 4/27/2016 3:53:00 PM
I find you still fresh and vibrant, but comfortable can be good too! Nice write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thanks John, a very nice thing to say!
Date: 4/27/2016 1:23:00 PM
Your use of metaphor in this piece is impeccable, your verse sings of the one constant, which is change. I think this is a beautiful display of your work that most anyone can relate to... and it is now a fav:), thanx, jill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 2:15:00 PM
Hi Jill, the site is doing weird things, my thanks to Tim seems to be multiplying. Thanks for the great comment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 4/27/2016 10:02:00 AM
Every once in a while we might try them on again but it just doesn't feel right anymore. Not as comfortable as we remember. I really enjoyed this one Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 4/27/2016 9:01:00 AM
Your personification of blue jeans makes me want to dig deeply into my closet before those favorite jeans no longer fit. This is as cool and those jeans, Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Lin, much appreciated.
Date: 4/27/2016 8:01:00 AM
You take an analogy and play it up to the max. Amazing write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Eileen.;0)

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