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Faces of the Ocean

Grey waters in storm Green waters in the sunshine Golden waves at dusk

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2013 11:56:00 PM

I love how you chose the three colors and represented them for different things, Isaiah. Nice to see again on the winners list

Donna Jones

Date: 7/22/2013 1:31:00 PM

This is awesome Isaiah ..congratulations on the recognition

Kash Poet

Date: 7/22/2013 12:13:00 PM

Very nice imagery in this haiku Isaiah !Congrats on the win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/22/2013 7:01:00 AM

Isaiah congrats on your fine haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:17:00 PM

Isaiah :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/28/2013 4:41:00 AM

Yip... that's the Ocean for you in a 'haiku' nutshell-- faces go well with the theme. Don't you just love haiku-- nice and short, but actually not that easy to write I guess. Thanks for stopping by my wall and thanks for encouraging words. Talking about walls.. our pictures are sitting at the top of the home page together.. I wonder how they decide who goes on?? Your parents gave you a great name btw.. where abouts in the US you based.. we moving to Texas soon-- we have green cards.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 12:43:00 AM

this is nice and colorful!! Congrats for your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:01:00 PM

Isaiah, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2013 2:18:00 AM

Just lovely! Congrats on your wonderful win!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations Isaiah .. great win

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 10:15:00 AM

3 separate parts, different days different times, haiku [ in the moment ie: 1 moment a snapshot, a frozen bit of time] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 4/21/2013 7:11:00 AM

Beautiful Isaiah. ...Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/15/2013 1:55:00 AM

I love the reflection.of that green in the sea....the greyish of water reminds me of sails in a tempest and those golden waves at dusk..ow a real shimmer at moonlight.You described a face in full make up lovely. By the way i managed some cowboy haiku at last..tnks for the inspiration : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 12:03:00 PM

Isaiah, good luck in the contest. nice shades of colors from the deep , I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2013 11:22:00 AM

Ahh.........all the muti-colors of the ocean wrapped in one beautiful haiku!! Nicely done!