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Faces of Loneliness

The face of loneliness is hidden by a mask A mask of smiles and laughter What can not be seen by the naked eye only few know That the face of loneliness is bottled inside The face of loneliness can take many shapes From the shy girl in the corner To the one with the most friends The least suspecting people are just the ones who hide it the best The face of loneliness banging to come out But you keep it trapped inside of you like a prisoner A prisoner locked in a small, dark room You keep it in for so long you don't know what's true The face of loneliness is hidden by a mask A mask that very few can see past But when one sees past it and opens up what no one else has The face of loneliness is cracked Like a mirror shattered on the floor And you don't feel so lonely anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/2/2013 11:18:00 PM
Sarah, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:16:00 PM
Sarah, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:18:00 PM
Sarah, ,love the win..PD
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Date: 10/21/2013 11:24:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Sara! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/21/2013 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, sarah
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:50:00 PM
so much truth in your words..congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:50:00 PM
Sarah...congratulations on your win...I think you said this very well...and is very often the case...well done..
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Date: 10/15/2013 10:34:00 PM
Hello Sarah, this is deep, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:55:00 PM
Sarah, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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