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Faces In the Mirror

I look in the mirror | and see my father's face, that accusing eye now judging self: "how did it get to be this way"... The moon's reflective ray, unveils truth in the mirror- and it's grandpa | in our early years stained with alcohol stained with tears, the blood of sons as red as Russia | Stalin's disgrace, broken faces, sullen, confined in the mirror each reflecting self |true communism in whole puddles of blood and roses twisted, in barbed wire now hold images of mom | and I see her face too like an angel's, an innocence fallen with the first touch of abuse to a a life of hell, and refuse to accept that these faces are all mine and I could go back a hundred years and see them all, freefalling through layers of pain, but I wipe my tears, and seek to see through it all my self, my image, my soul again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2011 11:47:00 AM
congrats on your win cory
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Ph.D Volo Von Wolfenstein
Date: 12/7/2011 3:05:00 PM
Thank you to everyone below and above for reading and commenting on my poetry, I encourage everyone to keep writing, and possibly even read some more of my own poetry ;)
Date: 12/7/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Wolf. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2011 1:20:00 AM
Congratulaions x
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Date: 12/6/2011 10:24:00 PM
I am also marked/graced with the images of my lineage. I have placed my father's picture beside my own and each day hope my son will someday do the same and swell as I do now. RAY
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:23:00 PM
I mean 5th place!!! (Sorry...)
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on 4th place in my mirror contest! I loved the details in this, and the interesting structure.
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