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Eyes of My Heart

Eyes of my heart, walking slowly toward me dressed in crimson, your movements both awkward and choreographic, distilled to an essence of intimacy in the echo chambers of the erotic, an inviolate space of possibility, joining one another in a zone deeper than breath. It couldn’t be any other way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/7/2013 7:18:00 PM
Well done Jack, enjoyed this romantic piece.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/7/2013 8:47:00 PM
Thanks... I had a good time writing it.
Date: 2/7/2013 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful very eloquent with words
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Date: 2/7/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thanks for the comment. I enjoyed reading your pieces, and I'm very impressed with how many you posted on your first day. I look forward to reading more in the future. Jack
Date: 2/7/2013 7:40:00 AM
This is beautiful Jack
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Jack Jordan
Date: 2/7/2013 8:39:00 AM
Kind words... Thank you.

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