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Eyes Ever after

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Eyes Ever after

Two pair of Eyes, assigned as leads,
by the puissant heart! As per the role had needs.
The play comprised a script of emotion,
and the pair showed utmost devotion.

Though rebellion ushered, but still they quelled,
Unaware of what the fable's future held.
One's defeat was written in the gamble with fate,
and at stake was the other's faith! As bait.

But the pairs were so much versatile,
that they could maintain many expressive profiles.
Legend has it! That once they shared a Paean,
synonym for an unctuous elegy about to wizen.

It's said that!
What they would see was whimsical, minus any frown,
even those sparkling above would come dancing down.
One was surreal and they named it 'Dew' !
but it was a tear drop out of those few.

It all happened ! because........

Once Destiny invited Heart to suggest,
that it had found an end to their existing quest.
It had found the suitable characters,
Who they thought will make their tale to be remembered Ever after.......

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  1. Date: 1/7/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win.Sending a soupmail.

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Something Different" contest Sushreeta. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:33:00 PM
    So you are back!Happy new year 2012.An Excellent write.

    Sundara Avatar Sushreeta Sundara
    Date: 1/5/2012 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sir! thanks for being my motivation always..... a very happy new year to you too!
  1. Date: 1/1/2012 7:04:00 PM
    As heartbreaking as it is, the beauty of the poem is unmatched!

    Sundara Avatar Sushreeta Sundara
    Date: 1/2/2012 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have nothing to say to you Genome!!!!.....thanks for being a part of my life!
  1. Date: 1/1/2012 9:12:00 AM
    Brilliant XXXX

    Sundara Avatar Sushreeta Sundara
    Date: 1/1/2012 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tracie.......