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Sad aqua blue eyes Swimming in an ocean of tears Sweetheart, I’m drowning and I can’t swim … Return my love And save me Contest:-Through your Eyes. Nette Onclaud Visual 4 23 words used Jan Allison 13th June 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 1:35:00 PM

Beautiful write, Jan, a7. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/5/2015 1:43:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 6/22/2015 9:44:00 PM

Nicely written and unique Jan...congrats to you!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2015 12:59:00 AM

Thanks David I'm glad you liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/22/2015 5:57:00 PM

Hi Jan, here I am again to congratulate you on your win:)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2015 12:59:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/22/2015 4:40:00 PM

Jan:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2015 12:58:00 AM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2015 3:47:00 PM

nice win. PD

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 3:51:00 PM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/22/2015 1:43:00 PM

HI Jan: Congratulations on a flowing poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 2:09:00 PM

Thanks Ralph - the image is so so wonderful I had to go with this visual:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/22/2015 2:56:00 AM

good take Jan congrats on placing hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W

Date: 6/21/2015 11:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks so much:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/21/2015 10:21:00 PM

Beautiful words, these, Jan! Congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:11:00 AM

Thanks Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/21/2015 9:11:00 PM

sweet piece Jan, many congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:10:00 AM

Thanks Francine:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2015 7:13:00 PM

hey, it looks like I never even saw this one before. BIG congrats, Jan. You are doing great with wins this week!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:04:00 AM

Not doing bad for someone who writes poop poetry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/21/2015 5:24:00 PM

Jan, a big congratulations to you on your placement with this beautiful write and thanks for visiting my poem, decay

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:03:00 AM

Thanks Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2015 5:20:00 PM

Found your name once again on the winners' list, Jan!! Congratulations!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:03:00 AM

Thanks Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/21/2015 5:19:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2015 1:02:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2015 3:10:00 PM

Love the blues amidst the hue, always save your loved one show love is true. Winners podium it shall be, deservedly, hugs // James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2015 3:17:00 PM

Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/14/2015 12:47:00 PM

great write on this visual, Jan: How did you get the picture there? I wish I knew how to do that. I am looking for the poop on that ....lol Can you Soupy me with some short instructions if you have time? Hugs, SuZ

Jan Allison
Date: 6/14/2015 2:00:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by with your lovely comment:-) soupmail:-) hugs jan xx