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Eye Image Ripples

see a drop of tear falls on a bowl of water eye image ripples

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 9:22:00 AM

BL, I can interpret this lil poem into two meaningful ones.. !nice one!~Olive ELoisa

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/27/2015 9:48:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2015 3:05:00 PM

to create a ripple, sadness aboard, wonderful haiku

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/26/2015 3:13:00 PM

Thanks my lovely genius friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/26/2015 5:40:00 AM

I can see the image, BL. It can also mean that when we are sad, our perception of things change. Not? Just a thought...hugs!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/26/2015 3:01:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. A nice philosophy of source of passion and vision is there. If a tear drop falls on water that drop makes a liquid hole on it for a second and seems like a small eye ball and starts rippling. If that drop falls on a hard place, picture is differently seen. Loved always,bl

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 2:42:00 AM

enjoyed your haiku , ~S.K.A.T.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/26/2015 3:03:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for you enjoyed my poem. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 4:04:00 PM

beautiful but sad imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2015 4:10:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl