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Extinctions

Extinctions (A Quatern, 1 May 2014) The waves receded from the shore. A creature strived to breathe the gas. It lived beneath the waves no more; First of it's kind to walk the grass. Came reptiles and amphibians. The waves receded from the shore. A meteor's oblivion Ended the reign of dinosaur. Those that survived came to the fore, And peaked with the larger mammals. The waves receded from the shore. Man reigned over the animals. Man's greatest enemy: HIMSELF. Not respecting what came before, He killed everything, thus himself. The waves receded from the shore.

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Date: 1/15/2016 10:03:00 PM
MARK, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:06:00 PM
Nice win
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:10:00 PM
Congrats on your placemwnt, Mark!
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Date: 7/7/2015 6:28:00 AM
Yes, we need to respect the creatures here on earth. Thank you, for sharing this insightful poem. Congrats, Mark.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/8/2015 5:22:00 PM
'Insightful' Thanks for the compliment. Glad you liked it.
Date: 6/30/2015 11:55:00 PM
MARK, :) Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/8/2015 5:22:00 PM
Belated thanks, Skat.
Date: 5/11/2014 12:25:00 PM
Scary times we're living in. I wouldn't be surprised if Iran nuked Israel sometime soon. Some days I wish I had a well stocked bomb shelter. Thanks for commenting.
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:13:00 AM
Very true Mark. How ever the world started, man will be the one to destroy it. The doomsday clock has been ticking for some 60 years now as Israel breaks off peace the process because the PLO and Hamas union and along comes Russia. Russia went on a full nuclear alert test the other day.
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Date: 5/4/2014 9:33:00 AM
Brilliant-- it kind of underlines the perspective of my poem "Old Planet Earth" in a more direct and 'face the truth' kind of way. xx~Xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/1/2015 10:14:00 AM
Belated thanks for commenting.

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