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Experience and Love

Experience of mine is growing to appearance. This boy has shown me a new sort of development. A new sort of engagement and patience as well as the power of the unexpected. I can rely on my senses. As when I saw him once first time ... I knew it will have a meaning. This has taught me about judgment of another human being of how different they are to what your intuition tells. The more experience gathered the stronger I appear within my mind and body. When it comes to love it comes to show bright new ways that were never felt. Those batterflys can be varied in escalation depending on how strong your chest squeezes. I just know this is something special it was felt... But not understood right away. As I continue to sink in to the fallen state ,I realise I realise the truth behind being sure, its something within a person , it's being able to go along to own thoughts and feelings and what is being said . I am almost sure about this one. This signal is clear and steady reasonable and powerful. This boy has a good heart has a experience of much more than me. I am ready to gather info of his situations that made him realise importance and meaning of life. The more I know the more eager I become to learn. And more happier I become when his voice rythm flows through my ears. And his eyes directed at centre of mine. -Rozalia Polnik (s)

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Date: 7/9/2014 4:04:00 PM
Rozalia, this is a very in depth poem about meeting someone for the first time. Nicely written... Verlena
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Rose Lil
Date: 7/10/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Varlena
Date: 7/8/2014 10:39:00 PM
Rozalia, this is a deep, powerful write that captured my attention! Well done!
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Date: 7/9/2014 12:47:00 AM
Thanxx alot for commenting , this poem was written in 5 minutes I hoped for it to be attention catching as for the powerful vocabulary :) I write what I feel.

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