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Existential Pondering

Pondering the universe, vast Curious for my part Spontaneously, thou scratch my ****… Marvin Celestial’s Poetry Contest – Senryu On Your Existence 20 June 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 8:49:00 AM

Ha ha, good one! Congrats.

Constance La France

Date: 7/4/2015 7:49:00 AM

Mark, congratulations on your placement in the contest, the first two lines a dream the last one... aaah not sure what to say about that lol

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:35:00 PM

Congrats on ur win Mark!

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:50:00 PM

MARK, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:27:00 PM

Mark, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 4:59:00 PM

How could I forget this one. congrats on the HM!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/3/2015 2:47:00 PM

Tehehehe - particularly love the last line! Congrats on the win! Pandita

John Lawless

Date: 7/3/2015 12:11:00 PM

Well done Mark, so many seem to miss the mark with the sneery form

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2015 6:52:00 PM

haha. I love how you did not take it too seriously. Mine is the same (when I ever get ready to post it!)

Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/20/2015 3:27:00 AM

True Senryu. Love it!