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Excuses

words pouring from your mouth in disguise your shades of sin cause doubt within do not reason your desires reveal your inner secrets no explanations stop telling me excuses just tell why. ©Holly P. Moore January 2013 Black Eyed Susan “Excuses” Contest

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Date: 1/29/2013 2:56:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks
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Date: 1/16/2013 6:48:00 AM
- Good poem, congrats on your win my friend. - Have not "seen" you on loooong time, Holly - Hope you are doing well. ----- Have a nice day. - Big hug from Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2013 1:58:00 AM
Holly still like this one...David will soup you later on today....
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Date: 1/12/2013 12:00:00 PM
Holly, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 8:10:00 AM
Holly big congrats on your win, hope you are feeling better...David
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
Congratulations, I enjoyed reading...Seren
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Date: 1/11/2013 3:09:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2013 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations Holly. A great poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/10/2013 5:51:00 PM
Hi Holly, nice to see you on Susan's winning list... always~ PD
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:53:00 PM
Lots of wisdom and insight shown in this poem, Holly...I need to learn more about this form...you did it very well! Congratulations to you! - Tim
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:16:00 AM
So true! It is the hardest thing to tell why.
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Date: 1/8/2013 11:50:00 AM
Soup mail...
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Date: 1/7/2013 2:02:00 PM
soup mail....
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:35:00 AM
You said that right. When people do something wrong, they invent all kind of excuses. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:15:00 AM
Greatly done wishing you all the best my lovely holly winning wishes
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Date: 1/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
Yep Holly this is good xx
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Date: 1/4/2013 9:18:00 AM
Holly this is your form, good luck...David
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Date: 1/3/2013 10:33:00 PM
Good One Holly, good luck in the contest ~Luv*SKAT
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