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Excrushitting

Must make haste
 Excruciating!
Time for "waste"

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/4/2016 8:26:00 PM

Chuckles :-)

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2015 11:57:00 PM

that was funny

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/15/2012 6:36:00 AM

Hi luv, miss you - so nice to have you visit again. Somehow I lost your email, it's just not there and I have so many wonderful things to send so fill me in and I'll get busy~! Put your email in a soup mail!

Nathan D.

Date: 3/13/2012 6:09:00 AM

very funny haiku there is always time for waste lol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/3/2012 5:51:00 PM

Hi Hussain, thanks for your visit, mis your great poems; we all are waiting patiently! :)

Daver Austin

Date: 1/31/2012 11:44:00 AM

Thanks for reading my stuff - what shall I call you...M? or M Hussain? or Mr. Effendi? I've read all your poems at least once. Write some more, some more, some more! Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 11:52:00 AM

hi....lol...stopping by to say hi... gonna check if you have anything new... lol.. look at my avatar... i'm looking at you...p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2012 7:07:00 AM

Hello,MHE ;-) how are you? I'm so happy that you stopped by my poem... My poet stamp, I had your name, on it... but, was not to sure about your name... he he he..i hope you don't mind I can't pronounce it... I also don't know if,, Effendi,is your first name... But, your name is on my original poem... lol.. you just have to search for it. i had to shorten the one on the soup. Send me mail..xox~pd

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/1/2012 6:53:00 PM

I'm tying the title to the last line Hussain; is that how it's supposed to be? Happy new year to you!

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 12/27/2011 11:00:00 AM

It is one of fine haiku I have read today

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2011 9:29:00 PM

M.H.E.,... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/12/2011 7:12:00 AM

what would we do without it, time for waste that is, very funny, enjoyed. harry

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 12/4/2011 11:20:00 AM

Good one ....smiles...Chiquita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2011 10:47:00 PM

Stopping by to say hi... also toooo check if you had anything new... always,..p.d.

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:56:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

Daver Austin

Date: 11/15/2011 11:52:00 AM

Thanks for reading me. Love, daver

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/9/2011 9:56:00 PM

A great effort to be hasty about. A hilarious feeling of desperation keeps a person motivated. I need to have this for a fav.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/8/2011 6:18:00 PM

Aha! An excruciatingly GREAT ONE! :D:D Always, Laura

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/8/2011 4:36:00 PM

This title may cause some at the Soup to be "backed up"...but I say drink some prune juice and let the Shitake go!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 7:25:00 PM

Sounds very painful... waste is a time of haste.. vise a versa ..... enjoyed your poem...p.d.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/7/2011 2:37:00 PM

Gotta Admit...I like your exhilarating style!

Daver Austin

Date: 11/7/2011 2:29:00 PM

The title says it all. The last line also. I like the term waste - not nearly as objectionable as the other one. Great humor. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2011 12:49:00 PM

Good play on words..You must have had your thinking cap on...Thanks for stopping by...Grits are corn grounded like coarse sand..They have to be cooked about 10 to 20 to tenderize them..There are instant kind which cook faster.. I add salt and pepper to mine as they cook for seasonings..I add butter sometimes, cheese sometimes, and sometimes I have gravy to put on them.. Sara