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Evidence Of Rain

The dense fog drapes all like a soft wool shawl
Morn's sun tries to peek through silver gray clouds
But those game roosters crow long_their pride show
God's creatures sing praise some soft_others loud
Rippled clouds (like sands upon a beach lands)
Float upon the eastern sky enshrouded
Caught up in this dense damp fog_ rain's evidence  

Kipling Style Work
First try at this stlye
Sponsor: Roy Jerden
Contest: In The Kipling Manner
Written by: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © Sara Kendrick

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:17:00 PM
    love this Kipling-esqe write, Sara - I couldn't think of anything for this contest, but you've done a great job

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:44:00 PM
    I have no idea what to do for that contest sigh..Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Hi Sara very good imagery here loved it, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Beautiful picture you've painted here Sara...I can smell that rain...reads like a winner - Tim

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 9:47:00 AM
    A magnificent canvas of nature painted with dazzling words of Poetry! Thank you!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Sara. Wish I was feeling the rain instead of the snow. So sorry you all have had that nasty flu bug. Seems to be all over. Take care. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
    This is a brilliant style work here Sara! You have masterfully done a Kipling Style poem here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and enlightening write this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 3:05:00 PM
    You "scourges" all into your lovely words, Sara. - ...... even the fog is "light and airy"("soft wool") - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:46:00 AM
    i thought it was something different. the game roosters had me, i use to live around chickens.