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Every You

The deeper I go The deeper I sink Weightless but heavy My heart starts to speak Tangled in you My mind is a mess It's torn and exposed Like open flesh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/3/2016 2:48:00 AM
Hi, Heather, for the wonderful thanks... Linda
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Date: 4/2/2016 12:40:00 AM
Heather Boardman, well done. LINDA
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much! <3
Date: 8/15/2015 1:29:00 AM
Heather, I like this very much SKAT
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/10/2014 12:33:00 AM
I can connect to this one.. well written! - Edward =)
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:35:00 PM
Yes it is very simple, but very direct. Thank you!! =)
Date: 9/7/2014 1:11:00 AM
WoW! This is a beautiful piece. Excellent write that I enjoyed reading! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Heather Boardman
Date: 4/2/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you very much <3

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