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Everlasting Fire

Everlasting fire Wood starts to burn As the fire sparks and flares The couple lay naked Warmed by the heat Entwined together Loving each other Whilst the logs keep flickering Contained in the woodburner Glowing, warming So tranquil Two move passionately, loving Setting their fire alight As the wood keeps burning The blushing embers Dance and twirl Watching enticed Mesmerised By the beautiful scene Of the women Laying as one Their flame burning bright As they melt simultaneously Unwavering In the gloaming light Of the fire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/9/2016 8:35:00 PM
A lovely melting and melding, Gail. :-)
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Date: 1/16/2016 4:52:00 PM
Sounds pretty romantic. I like it.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 1/16/2016 4:57:00 PM
It was very romantic, thank you Daniel
Date: 1/16/2016 4:35:00 PM
- Burning LOVE ....... lovely poem, Gail :) - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gail Underwood
Date: 1/16/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, hoping you also have an awesome weekend

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