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ever the romantic, yes i remember a time, when love did shine, but it wasn't real, physical thing with a wedding ring, no her name wasna hermoine, so she put me on the footpath, christmas eve, saying don't return, and traveling on, when love has gone, more lessons did i learn, anon... new verse hey Francine , thanks mate... Don

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Date: 3/12/2012 6:35:00 PM
This write is truly fantastic my friend! I really enjoyed how you approached love and the rejection of that love as well! Hey don't worry, I'm a romantic as well, I really love romance, it's my favorite state of being! This poem is really awesome that I have read this evening! I just love this poem Don!! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/12/2012 6:19:00 PM
Very well done! I liked this -- or rather, liked how you wrote it! Always, Laura
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:57:00 PM
Well written Don.......no moer wedding ring! :) - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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