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Evening Breeze

I’m alone on the bank of 
a large pond in my ancestral 
land. Evening breeze gently
touches the divinity hidden
somewhere in my body.

It brings the smell of soap
suds, painting a nude damsel
on my mind’s canvas. Soon
 it brings the holiest fragrance
of smoldering incense. I sin 
and purge in the same breeze.

I lie with fatigue on the sand.
Sweat drops on my forehead 
get dry, and my spirit revives
in the breeze. I wait for a fresh 
morrow. Evening chants of 
diverse creeds unite in the 
breeze. It pats on every head,
but nobody sees it.

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  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:02:00 PM
    Hi Fab, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 9:22:00 PM
    Vivid and evocative! Congrats on your poem placing in the contest! Ngoc.

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Congrats on your win in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 11:15:00 AM
    Congrats with your well deserved win,Fabiyas..Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 10:18:00 AM
    FAB... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 8:37:00 AM
    An amazing work! Great write, Fabiyas! Congratulations on your winning in PD's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/7/2012 7:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Always a winner!! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 5:59:00 PM
    A great piece my dear friend. Congrats. Luv n hugs. Michael.

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 4:58:00 PM
    way to go Fabiyas .. another excellent win for a fabulous write luv..

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:34:00 AM
    The heavenly evening breeze touches in depth in mortal body enjoyed. Really it's a beautiful poem. Loved and congrats on your win my friend,bl

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 7:18:00 PM
    Your whispers in the evening breeze a perfection, congrats. on your win, love,vie

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 5:52:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Fabiyas! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 4:59:00 PM
    Congratulations Fabiyas on a great write. :) Jon

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 1:19:00 PM
    congrats Fabiyas on a sensational second place win for this elegant entry my friend.. such fantastic lines of imagery luv..

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 11:17:00 AM
    Strong theme here, Fabiyas. "So I sin and purge in the breeze." Such a great, meaningful line to reinforce the overall imagery. Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest!

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:52:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas, nice one x

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Congratulations Fabiyas. I had not had the pleasure of reading this one before. Great job

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 9:43:00 AM
    Congrats, Fabiyas, Beautiful piece. Excellent. Well deserved win. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph