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Even the Angels Wept

Her country a war zone, where death was the king, She held her baby in arms, left for unknown land, Followed the crowd, and walked miles after miles, Hunger and thirst became curse, couldn't withstand. Her baby cried, closed his eyes, she felt his last breath, She walked with the dead baby in her arms and wept, When her limbs couldn't bear the weight of the dead, She gave him a sand burial, forever her child slept. So distressed and helpless, tears rolled from her eyes, She knew she would never return to her child's grave, With dead heart, she silently left followed the crowd, Even the angels wept, they no more pretended brave. May 5, 2016. EVEN THE ANGELS WEPT - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless Melancholy - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron
Please read: In August 2014, attack by the separatists on Yazidis in Sinjar, Iraq, was a massacre. Fleeing civil war, there were hundreds of thousands running toward the mountain. Many of the men were killed, small children, the sick and elderly were carried until their relatives collapsed from exhaustion. People died of thirst, and there was no food or water. Corpses were left on the roadside, unburied. Mothers had to leave their babies behind.

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Date: 9/28/2016 3:37:00 PM
Meenakshi, I remember this so sad and emotional poem from other contests, and I am happy to congratulate you once more for your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:30:00 PM
More people need to be made aware of this tragedy. You have exposed the intensity of this woman's struggle.
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations Meenakshi on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:48:00 AM
Meenakshi-wow, so sad, yet beautifully written....congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win for the "Any Poem You Ever Penned" poetry contest. I enjoyed your work - Jesse
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Date: 6/8/2016 3:19:00 PM
So sad and real in these times!Congratulations Meenakshi!
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Date: 6/8/2016 2:56:00 PM
So nice to read your lovely poem again, Meenakshi, and to congratulate you on another awesome win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2016 2:14:00 AM
congrats on your placement in the contest, such an emotional and touching write, beautifully penned, well done
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you dear...
Date: 5/7/2016 2:55:00 PM
Such a heart-wrenching poem, Meenakshi. When will we ever have peace in this world? I am so happy to see your poem on this Premiere Contest winner's list. Congratulations! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 5/7/2016 10:11:00 AM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your win in the contest. The innocent shall always suffer in wars and i think there shall always be conflict. This poem saddens me so much. Through your words one can so easily visualize each scene. We can but say "Why?" You bare your heart in this write Meenakshi. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 11:42:00 PM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 5/6/2016 10:38:00 PM
Oh my goodness....I love this poem it carries so much truth behind the emotional torn of heartstrings. Congrats on your placement in the contest-luloo :)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 11:42:00 PM
Thank you Laura...
Date: 5/6/2016 9:32:00 PM
Meenakshi, this is a very vivid and horrific reminder of the atrocities of war visited on the innocent. Thanks you for entering the contest
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/8/2016 11:43:00 PM
Thank you John...
Date: 5/5/2016 3:09:00 PM
I have a huge lump in my throat as I read this powerful write Meenakshi:-( hugs Jan xx7
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 5/5/2016 4:57:00 PM
This poem is based on true incident that I watched on TV and I couldn't stop my tears that day....it was saved somewhere in my memory and this contest gave words to my emotions.

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