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Even My Smile

. Drifting slowly in the warmth of her desire I rise My every member is on fire Yes even mine smile

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Amy Green

Date: 4/3/2014 3:48:00 AM

Yowser! You even made this beautiful, and have some guy giggling... MEN, TAKE NOTE- THIS IS THE KIND OF MAN WOMEN SEEK! Heck, you could give lessons and get rich off it!

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 11:58:00 PM

The seven year ty....much love, james

Daver Austin

Date: 5/2/2012 7:06:00 AM

Watch that on fire smile - bad for the teeth. Another fine rendering, Sir James. Suggest a cold shower. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 8:32:00 PM

very sweet that you made it "even your smile!" Me likes.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2012 12:54:00 PM

Oh, you are such a passionate man, James. I can't wait to meet you one day. Next time I travel north, I will visit you and Noah. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/29/2012 8:30:00 AM

I am caught up in the clever way you lead me through the wonderful warmth of desire; you manage to heat up a page with no effort at all which is quqite an accomplishment. Into my faves James, you do it so well :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/29/2012 4:40:00 AM

Passion flows my poet friend. Excellent piece. Michael. Thank you for all the warm and beautiful comments.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 6:19:00 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ "A Favourite In Delicate Beauty" *

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 6:16:00 PM

Smile ˜ Yes, Yess, Yesss, A Thousand Times Yessss ˜ She Is Sooo Beautiful Isn't She * My Love, Forever & For Always, John!:) ˜