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This poem was inspired by listening to my favorite blues singer. The late great Etta James. There's something about the way she sang. She lived the blues and she felt the blues, and nobody sang the blues like she did. This is my tribute to her. I listen to her music everytime I need my soul healed.

Take me deep into the night Give your soul felt feelings sight Comfort me, make my heart light As I embrace your vocal plight Sitting alone in my bedroom chair Forgetting all of my worldly cares Close my eyes, you're standing there Disrobing my conscience, completely bare In your voice I feel your pain Food for thought left not in vain Telling my story in each refrain There are no rules to this sad game Carry me to our special place Strum your words across my face Dry my tears, leave not a trace Revive those dreams I've laid to waste You're the one I always choose I can relate, I've worn those shoes When daily life starts to confuse You heal me while you sing the blues Strike your match, relight my flame Enrich my life, relieve the strain You left too soon, It's such a shame Rest in peace, Sweet Etta James an originaal poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Date: 3/16/2023 8:19:00 PM
Beautiful tribute and well worded how a song can make you feel, or seem like it's just for you.
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Date: 3/6/2016 2:35:00 PM
- Etta James, a great artist - Music that do something with your soul, heart and thoughts - Lovely written, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. It is very soothing music and well worth one's time. Thank you for the kind comments. I always enjoy your visits my friend. Peace to you:)
Date: 3/6/2016 11:09:00 AM
Etta James, a true classic! I was raised on real music, like hers, before it just turned into noise. Music that had something significant to say, was easily understood and felt by the soul. As an artist, I'm sure Etta would have been fulfilled to know she made such a strong connection and impacts your life in a positive and healing way. It's what we as poets are all trying to do. Beautiful tribute, Daniel. As classy as Etta herself!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thank you my dear for your kind words. I am just glad we can still hear her sing. I doubt I did her justice but this is how she is for me. She was a true classic and always will be a standard for others to gauge themselves by. As always, I appreciate your support and enthusiasm. Peace my dear, Jeannie:)
Date: 3/6/2016 9:36:00 AM
this is a very nice tribute to Etta. Sorry to say, I heard of her, but in my day, I was always listening to pop music and I am still doing it as I drive to work each morning!
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:43:00 AM
I listen to other kinds of music, it all depends on my mood. I do not listen to rap or hip hop as I do not understand. I do however listen to blues when I'm sad or lonely. One might think that depressing but I find it very therapeutic knowing others have felt what I am feeling. Could talk all day, Thank you for your kindness. Peace my dear:)
Date: 3/6/2016 8:21:00 AM
You as well Daniel.
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:33:00 AM
You have good taste in music. I enjoyed this piece Daniel.
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Richard for both compliments. You obviously have great taste in music yourself. I always enjoy your friendly visits and comments. Peace and have a great day:)
Date: 3/5/2016 11:58:00 PM
A wondrous tribute DT...You have to pop up for blues fest here this year and we can hut ajj the after sets at Buddy Guy's
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:03:00 AM
Sounds fun but probably won't make it. Since the discovery of my physical ailment they don't let me drive very far anymore. I'm lucky to get to Memphis. Last year Hot Springs started an annual blues event, we'll see how big it grows. Thanks for dropping in. Glad you had a great day at home with the family. Peace my friend:)Thanks for the flowers:)
Date: 3/5/2016 10:30:00 PM
So many emotions run through those lines my friend, I can feel it all! well done Daniel another masterpiece
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:53:00 AM
Thank you, Brian. I appreciate your kind words of support and for taking the time to stop by and read. Enjoyed the visit. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/5/2016 8:48:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to Etta. I like your four rhyme scheme. Keep writing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce. I appreciate your supporting comments so much. Always enjoy your visits and your smiling face. Peace sweet lady:)
Date: 3/5/2016 8:42:00 PM
I loved her music. Fitting tribute. Ah, old memories. Thanks for the chance to re-live a few...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie for taking the time to read and comment. Peace my friend:)

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