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Eternal String

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Eternal String

The lonely string-less kite, has no ambitions like a chartered flight, yet she soars, aimless but high. Fighting snarling trees, And dark electric lines, It s a peek-a-boo with death, Banking on wind's soft breath. Cut off from a mere mortal’s hand, Her vagabond life is short, But the flaps of freedom is dearer, Than the string of eternity.

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 1:43:00 PM
    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Anula. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 10:56:00 AM
    This sounds like "Personification" dear poet, And what a creative write you have penned ! Awesome ! Have a beautiful week ....much love, james

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 10:56:00 PM
    Very nice personification here...enjoyed.Thanks for your comment at my page.

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 8:54:00 PM
    Very profound write with lovely images , Anula