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Eternal Migration

- A Love Story - *Unpredictable enigma with a pony tail of willows **An exiled from deserts by the Despotic Thirst ***Deadly in her games yet playing with prisms ****Humans longing, chanting, reciting her name... *****I am still her lover - wandering man who can't cry ******She sneaked in my heart and stole all my tears ********My ship has her name engraved by a thunder *********I' m the eternal migrant looking for... RAIN... ********** ********** ********** ********** iolanda scripca

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Iolanda. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2011 6:22:00 PM

If Deb likes this, then I like it as well. Congratulations on winning in her contest.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2011 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your grand win in the contest, Iolanda. Sorry, I'm behind in everything. Always, great work! Love, Annalise

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/12/2011 2:26:00 PM

Hi Iolanda - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2011 8:40:00 AM

How did I miss this one?? Love it, Iolanda....what a unique and clever free verse!! Congratulations....and hope all is going as smoothly as possible right now? God Bless!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/11/2011 8:30:00 PM

Awesome. Many congratulations for this success.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations Iolanda on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 4:32:00 PM

What a great ending on this one, Iolanda. Love how you made this a love story. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/13/2011 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's Contest, Iolanda. I think this is beautiful! Love, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2011 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of constance, Iolanda

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/12/2011 9:19:00 PM

Many Congrats Iolanda on big win with this imaginative STARRY verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/1/2011 2:18:00 PM

smart very smart. John Henry Loving III

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/31/2010 1:41:00 PM

An excellent write. Phyl soup mail

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/30/2010 4:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Iolanda. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol