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Eternal Kiss.

ETERNAL KISS. ! What a strange sensation! Everything is different, The floor the ceiling, the air, your mind, Memories flying, confusing you, You don’t know if you are alive, you don’t know if you are dying, You’re desperate, looking for reasons, Invading your being, You tremble as you try to forget, Look at the sky, pray, I want to be alone, Look to heaven high, Waiting for help, Reminiscing on past memories, Living in the past, Dying at the present, Alone, feeling terror, She doesn’t look at you, Appear as she is dreaming, Her love is so great, That your suffering, Don’t want to see, Cherishing her face, I give her a kiss, Waiting that God, Listens to our prayers, Getting almost to heaven, From between two world, Her sparkling eyes open, Sketching her lips, An eternal kiss. RENE TORRES .11/02/2006. 11:05:25. renesiboney@yahoo.com

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Date: 12/30/2008 2:16:00 AM
Nice poem Rene, if you get a chance check out my tribute that Conor Jordan and Michael wrote me. I'd love to see your comments..Raul
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:53:00 AM
Rene... I agree with John... stunning.. just beautiful truly ! and filled with that bursting apprehension and excitement of love !!! loud APPLAUSE !!!!!
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Date: 12/8/2008 2:14:00 PM
Simplistic and stunningly romantic. Peace always and Happy Holidays, John
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Date: 10/23/2008 7:12:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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