Desert Rose

Come my beloved my fire my passion - desert rose of truth and life

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Eric Boddie

Date: 2/23/2016 3:27:00 AM

that's a very inspiring line....I see it as a sign....that a friend, you will be mine....because words get better with time....and this write was amazingly fine....offering hope in a way so kind....that I had to write this rhyme....great write jasmine....;)

Erica Rose
Date: 2/23/2016 4:04:00 AM

Hahaha that's very sweet of you, thank you eric ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2016 4:34:00 AM

- A beautiful line, Jasmine ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Erica Rose
Date: 2/16/2016 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/16/2016 12:34:00 AM

How lovely Jasmine.. no wonder it is a great win.. big congrats!

Erica Rose
Date: 2/16/2016 4:20:00 AM

That's very kind of you, thank you!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/15/2016 9:54:00 PM

Hi Jasmine, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.

Erica Rose
Date: 2/15/2016 10:44:00 PM

Thank you Vlad!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2016 7:08:00 PM

a passionate one this is. Congrats for the win.

Erica Rose
Date: 2/14/2016 7:43:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 8:56:00 PM

Hi Jasmine, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for melting my heart with your one liner. Stop by my latest blog "HOT AIR," if you'd like to view the lovely VALENTINES card I pinned for all the winning poems on my list. LOVE ~The Poet Destroyer~

Erica Rose
Date: 2/14/2016 12:27:00 AM

Thank you so much! Happy Valentines Day!