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Erosion of Time

Time melting away, Dissolving in a slow fade; Never found again. ___________________ Inspired from 'Explosion' By Salvador Dali www.s-kite-art.com/dali/dali04.html

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2009 1:02:00 PM

So true that we can't regain lost minutes, lost time. That's why it's important to make the most of every day. (I'll have to check out Dali's painting.) Great poem, Raul! Love, Carolyn

Danielle Moreno

Date: 4/1/2009 6:15:00 PM

Great work..............Danielle

Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 10:04:00 AM

Great representaion of the painting, your work never lets me down.

Date: 3/29/2009 4:50:00 AM

So much truth in your powerful statement. Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Good job! Karen

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/28/2009 11:47:00 PM

Great description of a excellent painting, nice rendition in words.

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/28/2009 3:34:00 AM

Raul this is a very well written and profound Senryu that you have penned - Great to read you again - God Bless, MJ

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 10:04:00 PM

A nice Ekphrasis-senryu Raul, you are on a lovley roll. You drop poems like crazy. Keep them coming. I really enjoy your entertaining reads, you never let down. Love Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:13:00 AM

Erosion it is, time is lost forever, clever way of grasping it. DN

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/27/2009 2:56:00 AM

Nice representaion of the painting. Great muse you chose. Tyler

Brian Strand

Date: 3/27/2009 1:02:00 AM

Great ekphrasis Raul/Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Ronald Bingham

Date: 3/26/2009 7:19:00 PM

Point well made, Blessings my friend, Ron

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/26/2009 7:19:00 PM

Excellent description of a facinating piece of art! ~ Well done! ~ Carrie

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/26/2009 6:00:00 PM

We can't turn back yesterday once it is gone. that is why we have to make the best of today...Powerful creation here, Awesome Write~GB Always, Tyesha

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/26/2009 4:40:00 PM

Raul, this is so strange I was just looking at his work online about a half hour ago thinking of writing something, and here you did! Is he not fascinating and so inspiring? Excellent write! Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/26/2009 4:05:00 PM

so true we can't turn back time once it melted away,i like how you described it,a lot-cheers

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/26/2009 3:48:00 PM

Love this Raul....time is such a precious commodity..this write is so profound. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/26/2009 3:48:00 PM

Love this Raul....time is such a precious commodity..this write is so profound. BG

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/26/2009 1:40:00 PM

Time-- just like the Ice-caps slow fade-- perfect write

John Weber

Date: 3/26/2009 1:31:00 PM

The flimsy construct of time only appears fluid when unobserved. Perhaps, we make mechanical time real with our belief in following such patterns? Great progression of Dali's theme, Raul! Warm regards, John.