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Erased

I write my poems in pencil, An eraser close at hand, An older version of “Delete” To follow my command. With one quick rub, or maybe two, The words just disappear; A ghostly hint remains beneath, A first draft souvenir. I like those subtle tracings Which remind me, looking back, How rare it is to nail a thought, Above all, at first crack. It’s much the same in life, for though Apologies are made, The hurt that caused their utterance Is just a lighter shade. For if you look quite carefully, You’ll get a little taste Of feelings that were first to flow, Not totally erased.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/26/2013 5:01:00 PM
I really like this one. Great thought behind it, Ilene!!!
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Date: 8/26/2013 4:15:00 PM
A VERY poignant poem ilene. Life is a constant creation and we are imperfect. Well said. :)
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Date: 8/26/2013 11:42:00 AM
I love your work Ilene keep it up love xx
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