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Equally Sinner

Blood stains on my hand though I never touched a gun, every bullet fired splashes blood on both our hands, each death leaves a scar in heart! 'Dedicated to those deaths which can be avoided,which make us feel sinner' © kashinath karmakar (6th July 2011) =========================000========================= Placement : 10th (October 2011) Contest:A Short Poem,Please Sponsor:Constance La France

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Date: 9/3/2011 11:28:00 AM
The paranormal will heal, Kashinath......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:26:00 AM
Many congratulations, Kash : )
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:25:00 AM
A Tenth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:55:00 AM
Thought provoking Kash. well written. regards Marg
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Date: 9/2/2011 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/1/2011 4:30:00 PM
A beautiful and meaningful write Kash, congratulations to you ;)
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Date: 9/1/2011 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 1:22:00 PM
Very heart felt writing. Should have placed higher. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:55:00 AM
Powerfully said....wow...kashinath there is a punch in each word!
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:39:00 AM
hey kash congrats on another great win..David
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:33:00 AM
Congrats Kash on another great big win with profound poetry as this luv... great dedication and many share this sentiment too..
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:13:00 AM
Very creative, Kashinath. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, kashinath
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Date: 7/7/2011 11:13:00 PM
Very interesting one from you, Kash, gosh, what made you think of this!! Is it for a contest? soupmail
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:59:00 PM
This is so true, Kash. I wish everyone could understand that "each death leaves a scar" on all of our hearts. We'd live in a more peaceful world. Love,Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
Loved this deep, powerful write, Kash.
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Date: 7/7/2011 8:49:00 AM
Wow, very gripping tanka you have here, Kashinath and thought provoking, too, seems like sometimes, we are indirectly responsible and also have blood on our hands...
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:25:00 AM
when's the next treat, kashi.?.:) i did a tanka... come on over! huggs, nette
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:57:00 PM
Lovely message very deep, kashinath
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:03:00 PM
Oh,so dark.Very good.
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Date: 7/6/2011 11:28:00 AM
gripping, kashi... i drool over this winning material.. whoo! :) hugggs and come visit! nette
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Date: 7/6/2011 9:12:00 AM
powerful piece Kashinath and poignant last line luv.. your title says it all my friend.. another absolutely amazing one..luv..
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:35:00 AM
Gave me shivers - well said Kash!
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