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Equality In the End-

taking a step away from the noise and commotion with uneasy thoughts following the nameless emotion tilting back and forth and side to side while flower holding hands push you in the divide and you suddenly find yourself laying alone soon realizing that you’re not quite at home the next step away allows for more apprehension but you thought all this would release the tension that comes with leaving the familiar door and wondering around the sinking floor that drops you into a mysterious unknown soon realizing that you’re not quite at home the final step away halts your timeless clock and the world stops turning like a key in a lock as light begins to fade into a shadow dark with a soundless sigh as your farewell remark buried beneath your name on the gray stone soon realizing that you’re not quite at home

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Date: 1/29/2011 10:13:00 AM
Today is a soft restless sort of day and unwilling to get involved in the too many projects I'm supposed to be doing I was sitting here doing my homework and I thought of poetry and how soft it makes me feel. Of course I looked you up since your my favorite. You did not disappoint
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Date: 3/24/2010 9:18:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Luke. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:19:00 PM
whoa... that was powerful and deep. I love how it hits hard but still finds a soft spot. well written
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