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Epic Sighting

Epic Sighting Above the mountainous jagged peaks Demonic clouds drift over its plain a hamlet of spires set in front of A tall black monolithic structure Encompassing it for protection And to quell intrusion from the forces Should any harm befall it pray not As a mother would in times of need But the dire scene is softened by the ambience of pink that awaits to overtake the passing darkness and blending with the golden hamlet That sets on the precipice of light Endears the brightness ending night Epic Sighting Contest November 26, 2015 Picture #1 Ralph Sergi sponsored by Poet Destroyer

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Date: 12/17/2015 4:14:00 PM
A true epic poem Ralph many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:05:00 PM
I see congrats are in order here ! Wow..terrific thrilling writing..I love how you tied it with as a mother would in times of need..great job
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Date: 12/11/2015 6:50:00 AM
Ralph, truly deserving first place.. =`) belated congratz!~olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/9/2015 12:27:00 PM
how incredible can this be, ralph.. sweet top congrats.. huggs
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/13/2015 1:07:00 PM
Hi Eloise: A belated thanks for your belated comment (ha ha ) i was away for a time.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/9/2015 12:44:00 PM
I MEAN THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/9/2015 12:43:00 PM
Hi nette: TANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Date: 12/7/2015 1:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. Great tone and imagery. SuZ
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:34:00 PM
Congrats Ralph very descriptive write. well done.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2015 3:00:00 PM
Hi John: Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 12/5/2015 9:49:00 AM
Great write Ralph, very descriptive.
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:15:00 AM
Beautifully done, Ralph. Congratulations on your well-deserved top of the podium win! 7 Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:46:00 PM
Ralph, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2015 3:24:00 PM
Hi SKAT A: THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WISHES!
Date: 12/4/2015 11:30:00 PM
Exquisite write Ralph.. congrats on top podium!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2015 3:23:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma: Thank you for your good wishes!
Date: 12/4/2015 11:02:00 PM
perfect by the way. exactly what I was looking for. <3 LINDA
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2015 3:28:00 PM
Hi Linda: Thank you very much; the picture evoked my imagination!
Date: 12/4/2015 11:01:00 PM
Hi Ralph, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/6/2015 3:29:00 PM
I have and thnks for including mr among others.
Date: 12/2/2015 7:54:00 PM
My kind of poem. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:56:00 PM
truly excellent pen ralph wishing you a blessed week dear friend
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