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Entwined

his kiss haunted her, howled at her, it edged through the crowd just to daunt at her, this was a cold she had never known, blown winds through creaky shutters, shuttered thoughts of fireside talks and walks, his lips able to do the impossible, possibly taking from her the one thing she knew to be pure, her warmth; she panicked with frenzy, her body now a clock, wound tight, full of fright, never having felt these waves, slaves to his hands, as they ran everywhere within her soul, paralyzed with suspense, tense, as her insatiate desire for velvet touches grew anew, her eyes closed, as the conquest pursued, locking in her memory, this glory, this story, as if it were the last one she'd be allowed to have in this life; her body trembled, desire assembled, as he admired the alluring contour of her silhouette, sweeping across her skin so soft, with the lightest touch of persuasion, perfection soon, a union of bodies abound, found within this moment of two into one, she needed to find him, a whim of mercy, free from inhibition, falling deeper and deeper, into every heartbeat, he knew he could destroy her with his touch, touching her with only his trust, he prepared to forgive her sensations as they demanded more and more of him, here, with her; then they climbed to the canopy to see the sun together, their hands locked, the rush of rays exploded their worlds, weeping willows of emotion covered the bridge formed between their eyes, glued to one another, gazes gazing, lofty and full of love, an expression of silence, forever etched, echoes in space, jumping stars, eternal and free, dreaming; finally, falling blindly from the deepest canyons in the winter sky, tears of joy, jumping off the cliffs into pools of warm water, tranquil, splashing passion onto walls, painted brushstrokes of temptation, wondering how could they duplicate this moment again, he whispered into her ear the sweetest words she loved to hear, then he kissed her, again, and again it began, their worlds bound to the everlasting end; February 8, 2016

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Date: 2/9/2017 7:53:00 PM
You may miss some comments from people who have to immediately find their love and run into the bedroom. Not kidding. And the poetic way you delivered erotica is nothing short of WOW. Was frowning just a bit, very tad, making sense of 1st stanza structure, then semi-colons enlightened and enhanced the heat of your pen. Nice touch from my perspective. Impressive! I congratulate you and wish you all the best ... CayCay (I talked a lot because my man is at the store. Kidding?)
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/2/2017 5:51:00 PM
This is a wonderful comment, CayCay-- I can only hope my words compel others to live out their passions...in anyway that might bring them joy ;) Thank you, though, for the feedback on the writing in addition-- glad the eloquence was able to shine through. Appreciate the comments, have a wonderful night. sam
Date: 2/9/2017 6:29:00 AM
Brilliant Sam, congratulations on the win...
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/9/2017 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie-- much appreciated.
Date: 2/9/2017 4:30:00 AM
Superb Sam, so passionate! Congrats on your win.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/9/2017 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Phil-- I appreciate the pat and the feedback. Have a great day.
Date: 2/8/2017 12:00:00 PM
Hi Sam, big congratulations and a 7 to you on your superlative top-of-the-class win! This beautiful romantic piece is so very deserving of this honor! Best wishes. Pandita
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/9/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita-- so nice of you to drop in with your kind words. I appreciate your feedback on the work-- it feels nice to know that perhaps the verse offers just a few moments of bliss when others might read it :) Have a wonderful day!
Date: 2/8/2017 11:33:00 AM
Sam, what an amazing write, 30/30 so a perfect poem, could find no deficiencies. Thank you so much for submitting this marvelous poem, a7 and a fave! Very worthy winner!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/9/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, John-- I'm grateful for the placement and happy the work was able to strike a few chords with your vision. I appreciate the kind feedback as well-- I really enjoyed writing this piece at the time so I'm glad to dust it off for another day in the sun :) Thanks again, take care!
Date: 2/27/2016 1:16:00 AM
once again, thank you for the kind reply
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:42:00 AM
Sam, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, for your continued support on the work, as always :) It is very much appreciated.
Date: 2/23/2016 9:10:00 AM
Great write Sam! The perfect amount of beauty, desire, passion and imagery combined into a very well written piece.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, James. Those are very kind remarks, I truly appreciate them. I'm glad you enjoyed the work, it was a joy to write it. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Date: 2/23/2016 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this amazingly sensual verse!
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I very much enjoyed writing this piece, I'm glad you found some inspiration within the words. Have a great day!
Date: 2/23/2016 12:18:00 AM
packed with mystery!.. congrats on your top spot, sam..huggs
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 7:13:00 AM
mystery always and forever entwined :) thanks for the praise on the work, Nette...means a lot, have a wonderful day.
Date: 2/22/2016 11:08:00 PM
Hey Sam, Congrats on your 1st place finish. Excellent write. Cheers, Brian
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/23/2016 7:11:00 AM
I appreciate that, Brian. Thank you for dropping by with a handshake. Have a great day my friend.
Date: 2/22/2016 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Sam..
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Dr., I really enjoyed creating this piece, very glad it was able to connect. Thanks for your warm comments my friend.
Date: 2/22/2016 6:50:00 PM
Sam, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Sam Jameson
Date: 2/22/2016 7:34:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I truly appreciate your kind remarks. Have a wonderful night!

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