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Where have you been? I’ve worried so. I feared to leave the nest. That Mr. Crow was hanging round. You know he’s such a pest He taunted me and said that you were a bold philanderer and that you’d be deserting me and running off with her. I know what he was doing, just trying to get my goat so I’d leave our home unguarded. That would be all she wrote. Have you eaten? I’ve been waiting for you to bring some food. You’ve forgotten it? How could you? Mom said you were no good. I swear I’m going back to her unless you change your way. Now come back here! I am not through. I’ve plenty more to say. Get on that nest. It’s your turn now. I’m going out to eat. And don’t mess up my nice clean house. You had better wipe your feet. Don’t look at me with those big eyes. You think you have it tough? It’s time you took some of the load. I’ve simply had enough!! For Francine's "Enough" contest placed at no. 4

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Date: 5/16/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Joyce. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:36:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win this contest... enjoyed this very funny write and how she asks him to wipe his feet..simply stunning. love,gautami
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Date: 5/11/2011 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on your wins, Joyce : )
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:47:00 AM
I am not surprised this was a winner....so clever and adding the human touch!!! Congratulations, dear Joyce!
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Joyce
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:28:00 AM
So very funny, Joyce. I enjoyed it much. Sounds familiar somehow.. :) chuckling all the way. Congratulations on a well deserved win . Such a simple little contest and it brought out alot of entertainment! enjoyed
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Date: 5/10/2011 10:05:00 PM
Great win, congrats to you x
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:32:00 PM
Many congrats dear friend for this super win. God Bless always.
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Date: 5/10/2011 9:04:00 PM
"Enough" for a big win.. LOl..Congrats to you..this is great. BG
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your fantastic win in Francine's contest with this terrific entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend...luv..
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:09:00 PM
Good job. Congrats
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:57:00 PM
So happy to see your ranking high, Joyce! Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2011 7:38:00 PM
congrats on your fourth place win in my contest Joyce, truly wonderful entry
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Date: 5/10/2011 2:29:00 PM
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:52:00 AM
Dear Joyce, thanks for letting me know you have computer access. If you want to chat, just shoot me an email and I'll call. Have a podiatry appointment today but will be home later this afternoon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2011 12:57:00 PM
This is so funny Joyce. It sounds like my father scolding my mother, or vice versa. Thanks for sharing this humor with me. Good luck in Francine's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:51:00 PM
An awesome piece Joyce ..good luck in the contest my friend.. a clever take on the photo from Francine.. and a brilliant tale u told .. creative and cleverly penned luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:13:00 PM
LOVE your use of personification here, Joyce! I'm glad this bird is leaving the nest -- she deserves a good dinner. You had me laughing throughout the poem. Well done, dear. I hope your brother's condition has stabilized. Still in my prayers. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:29:00 PM
Good one, Joyce. I like. Good luck in the contest. :))
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:59:00 AM
Oh, this is so funny....so clever to use this as a nagging wife poem!!! Well done, Joyce!!
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:46:00 AM
this was very nice good job! you have a way with words and that is a great talent to have. cory
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Date: 5/4/2011 8:33:00 PM
Awesome, Joyce, a clever well metered poem on that funny bird pair! Luv, Andrea
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