Get Your Premium Membership

Enough

I will die here at the doorsteps of your heart wondering why you let me come so close and yet you kept me so distant A wall of ice and glass prevents me from any further move Gasping for my last breathe I am left to guess what it takes for you to give up plans and schemes and surrender to love When you will finally open that door my corpse will greet you frozen and you will not be able to ever resuscitate me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/17/2011 1:51:00 PM
Holy Sweet Tapdancing Christ, Rosanna, are you positive that you have to feel so badly about this? This isn't to say that the poem is bad, because it isn't (though the format could be better,) just that it seems too intense. Anyway, gave me a chill at the last stanza, good write.  -KMD
Login to Reply
Tarsiero Avatar
Rosanna Tarsiero
Date: 11/18/2011 7:25:00 AM
AHAHHAHAHAH I use my poems as an outlet for all those feelings that our society deems to be not "positive enough" for their massive positive thinking delusion. Thank you for the compliment.

Book: Shattered Sighs