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In life there is much laughter, however, life is no laughing proposition. For "Chiasmus" contest sponsored by David Williams.

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:16:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2012 10:23:00 PM

And I did "Enjoy" this chiasmus on Enjoy!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2012 7:40:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..I appreciate the time spent there....Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2012 3:38:00 PM

Brilliant, well said George. - Luck in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2012 3:31:00 PM

excellent entry, George, like this. harry

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/24/2012 2:10:00 PM

Great opposing tho'ts, George...I find this a super duper hard form...I am glad that David took the time to sponsor this contest...It has stretched our minds a bit and caused this great monoku to be berthed!...I have to agree on both themes in your monoku...life is short..laugh a lot!...be serious too-when warranted! ...thanks for finding my work a "hidden treasure"..you tickle my heart, George,..every time!! Gwendolen

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2012 1:53:00 PM

Very good Chiasmus by you George.Enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my page.

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/24/2012 1:48:00 PM

very well written.Good luck to you!