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Endangered Feline

Panting in low moans Meandering through dense brush Shrouded by evening sky above a forest Crystallized by frozen branches Oaks, maples, pines Coffin wood encasing icy earth The amber-eyed predator’s fur Damp and matted No prey in sight as hunger grows While creatures huddle with their clans In feathered nests and sheltered lairs She trekked on frozen leaves confused Longing for the comfort lost She couldn’t understand her plight Life had once been kind As dawn dispelled the sandman A cry I heard outside Weak and wanting tones of desperation A child lost? A babe who strayed? Anxiously I donned my coat Fearing what I might find On this late December morn’ Listlessly she scratched and sobbed The glass door kissed by thick ice But when I turned the knob And pushed the panel forth Her tragedy bit hard and sharp Her tender paws, raw with dried blood Infection had sealed one eye shut A bony spine, frostbitten ears So fast I took her in my arms Cradling this wayward soul Reaching for a blanket, sharing salmon A faint purr was my thanks For warmth and love and food Peering at her one good eye, I wept Overcome with pity and grief I realized the selfish act That led this sweet one to my yard College youths on Christmas recess Left her on a nearby road Before they joyfully headed home I found their tiny cat today Abandoned, nearly dead Stung by an act of thoughtlessness Fear not; the one-eyed cat will live A refuge I’ll provide But do not ask me to forgive The sin that made her mine For P.D.'s Pet Contest. Dedicated to Katie Cat, my pet of more than 20 years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:10:00 PM
awww folks who don't care about animals seldom care about humans either! I'm so glad you gave her a nice home and for SO long too! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 6/5/2011 12:53:00 PM
Carolyn while I read this I could feel the secure warmth that cat felt in your arms when you took her in.since yesterday after reading these poems remembering my two kittens, they too were left abandoned before a good friend found them and brought them to me...love to you and katie and Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:45:00 PM
I really hate the people who could treat an animal like that. I remember you telling me how loving Katy Cat was. Sending congrats to you, my friend : )
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:29:00 AM
Conmgratulations on this win to you in the contest of p.d., Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:04:00 AM
Very touching! Well written and with so much feeling. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 6/4/2011 6:17:00 AM
congrats on this exceptional win. cory
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Date: 6/4/2011 4:13:00 AM
Congrats on your big win in P.D's contest *cheers*
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Date: 9/7/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Cat Poems~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2010 2:39:00 PM
Oh Carolyn, your wonderful poem has me crying and moved me so much. It certainly deserved the number one spot it was given. I love the way you wrote this in three impactful lines which enhanced the drama poor kitty had to endure. So glad she found a wonderful loving home with you! You are a very talented poet. Congratulations on your big win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 9/6/2010 11:54:00 AM
This poem is special! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:49:00 PM
congrats on the number one win!!
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations! I'm finally getting around to commenting, smile. Excllent! Carolyn, loveed it. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in constance's contetst, Carolyn
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on this wonderful win luv Michael
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Date: 9/3/2010 12:25:00 PM
That was simply b'ful, cat's got and will get too much love from you Carolyn. Congratulations. God bless.
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Date: 9/3/2010 9:34:00 AM
Awesome story, Carolyn. What a tremendous final line! LUv, Andrea oh, and congrats!
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Date: 9/3/2010 3:38:00 AM
Heartiest Congratulations on this wonderful win. Loved the end.
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Date: 9/3/2010 2:32:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on your 1st place with this awesome write my friend.. Hope you will enjoy the day ahead, love you Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:36:00 PM
Stop making me cry with your poetry..congrats my dear LNC on another winning poem. BG
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:13:00 PM
Carolyn, I can't blame the rescuer for her anger which resulted from the senseless inhumanity. The abuse and suffering of the innocent kitty soul brought tears to my eyes and put a painful lump in my throat, literally. I'm so happy fate brought the cat to your safe haven.
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Date: 9/2/2010 6:23:00 PM
wow, what a heartfelt poem, congrats on your well deserved first place spot
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:58:00 PM
That last line, is brilliantly sad, touching, and terribly true, much too often. Congratulations dear Carolyn, on this lovely winning poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:44:00 PM
A wonderfully sad and great poem. Congratulatiions. Thank goodness my kitty found me in nice weather and in good health but I know he was dumped. He is on my shoulder as we speak. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on first place in my contest Cat Poems~~ your poem truly spoke to my heart for I took in a one eyed cat once also. First place, is a shared honour this time. I was finally able to finalize the contest, yahoo~~ please confirm your address by soupmail and I will forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry~~ Dear Heart
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