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End of the Month Blues

I've got no money ba da da da.... Need me a Tiffany bauble To brighten my day. Da da da da.... Can't order nothing My credit is over drawn Da da da da Got three strings on my guitar and my TUNE IS FLAT Sing with me now---Da Da Da Daaaaaa!! I got the end of the month blues Got no money blues Got the gray sky blues.....Ba da da da!!! Whistle now.... {v~v} [*v*] ]-g-[ ]^uu^[

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/17/2011 2:08:00 PM

I've had those blues many a time. Great write Doris, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/12/2011 12:42:00 PM

Let me tune that guitar for you, then I'll sing alang! A fun, creative write, Doris! Da da da da! xoxo Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 12:04:00 AM

but u don't got the poetry blues Doris ..this is so fun and so terrific .. and all can relate to the end of the month blues... oh ..only getting worse..it seems.. hope u get that guitar string ..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2011 11:34:00 PM

and also the cop dying to get in his quota will stop you on the freeway last day of the dang month!!! Inevitably. hahaha. Good one, Doris.

Katie Telling

Date: 8/11/2011 9:09:00 PM

This is great! It especially speaks to me because singing and writing songs with my guitar is my hobby, and I'm broke too! :) Well done! And thanks so much for your comment on my poetry!!

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/11/2011 7:19:00 PM

Oh my!!! What a grinner!

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/10/2011 12:00:00 PM

Oh I'm singing with you Doris! Ba da da da!!! :-( :-] :-> :-) :-) :-) :-) From sadness to smiles Because of you!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/9/2011 10:31:00 PM

You aren't the only one Doris. I'm trying the Readers Digest Sweepstakes. There's gotta be another way.

John Smith

Date: 8/9/2011 5:11:00 PM

I'll sing with you, Doris. In this economy you could get vast numbers to sing along.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2011 1:21:00 PM

Sorry that this is happening in your life..Sometimes we live from one pay period to another..We forget to ration it out over that period so that we will have a little over time..Made a good poem..Made me think of Nannow..He would always say well at least the bills are paid for another month and we can stay here or the food is bought and we can eat..Mom

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/9/2011 9:56:00 AM

haha well at least your'e singing about it. Doris. hope payday comes soon so you can end this blues tune da da ba da