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Enchanting Fairytales make life’s romance enchanting, Beguiling souls, entrancing, enchanting. Reality can change dreams’ to yearnings, Thinking of tomorrow’s views, enchanting. Peaceful thinking ignites inspiration. Ending fights and frights with right’s enchanting. Haughty hearted men may stay in shackles, The modest souls live each day enchanting. Evil smites godliness as wealth rabbles. The godly give their kindness…enchanting. Conceit looks up to self, down on others. Meekness wears modesty’s crown…enchanting. Dishonesty destroys mighty friendships Truthfulness sets trusting free…enchanting. One intricate surviving machine, earth, Strives, thrives, co-exists, and gleans…enchanting. Mountain splendor boasts glorious vastness. Lovers join mysterious enchanting. Nature’s beauty arouses man’s spirit, Designing beautiful lands, enchanting. Poetic Form: Ghazal © Dane Smith-Johnsen April 17, 2010

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Date: 4/28/2010 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Dane Ann on your amazing win in the contest!! Enjoy! Love, audrey
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Date: 4/27/2010 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this wonderfully enchanting work. good job Dane Ann.......luv Margaret
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Jared's contest.. amazing and awesome write and win..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/27/2010 12:54:00 PM
Your interpretation of the Ghazal was a delight to read.... Thank you for taking the time to create this beauty for my contest.... Congratulations my friend on your third place victory.....:JP]
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:37:00 PM
great job gal friend stiff competition! Always striving for perfection. Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2010 9:10:00 AM
Couldn't agree more with many of the things you said, Dane Ann, especially "Peaceful thinking ignites inspiration." When we are most at peace, we find our best inspiration. Some think good poetry springs from agony. Looking back at the poems I wrote when depressed, I know this is not true. You have a gem here and deserve your shining "star." Love, Carolyn
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