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Enchanted Hearts

When we met we were broken soles. Our hearts looked rough, rugged and old. Both had scars and memories hard to erase. Together we'll be stronger, in all possible ways. I place my heart in her hand, and she placed hers in mine. I took hold of her gift, so fragile and sublime. Now we have each other’s hearts, forever we shall keep. There will be no more hurting no more pain, and no longer will we weep. Every day as we grow, we will no longer be afraid. Old memories will vanish, and our scars will fade. These two damaged hearts that became attracted. Have now become, beautifully enchanted.

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 12:48:00 PM

What a lovely uplifting write Ronald - I think many of us can relate to having our heart broken and in time finding that special someone to share our life with:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 12:58:00 PM

Ronald, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ronald Tinmurth
Date: 9/7/2016 2:31:00 PM

Hi, and thank you for popping by and reading my poems, Linda. I am the kind of person that would (if given the choice) rather have constructive criticism than praise. In my opinion, it's the only way to learn, and to advance skills. I would be grateful for any comment's though. It would be nice to hear that my poem has inspired someone. As for my poetic skills, I am unsure of them myself. I normally just write them then end up sending them to the recycle bin. My partner actually convinced me to find somewhere to post them. I didn't realise she had even seen them.

Skat A

Date: 9/7/2016 11:08:00 AM

Ronald,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Ronald Tinmurth
Date: 9/7/2016 2:37:00 PM

Hi SKAT, and thank you for passing by. I'm looking forward to getting to meet other poets to get inspiration from, and hopefully, learn more about poetry in general. As I have just stated to another member, I normally write and bin, but my partner got around me to find a place to share them. :)