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Below is the poem entitled Enchanted which was written by poet Broken Wings. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I inhaled the crisp air It smelled of life and of earth The scents of the forest Sweet and piercing within the silence There was a loneliness and an isolation There was beauty and tranquility . . . Trees gave way to fields of green And wildflowers in every hue There were sounds The twitter of a bird, a squirrel foraging It all blended seamlessly with the foliage A perfect silent harmony . . . I heard the sound of rushing water A waterfall falling over cliffs I let the water trickle on my hands Cupping them to drink the sweetness Below glimmering rocks rested And silver fish swam . . . . Suddenly the sun was sinking And I must leave this enchanted glen . . . Written September 30,2012 For the Drunken Pen, Round 2 Contest Sponsored by Joanne Grisette

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:38:00 PM
    I love how your pen flowed so nice in this work of poetic art... hugs always Michael

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
    just enjoying this one again, my friend. Hope you are feeling better and had a great Thanksgiving xx

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 4:10:00 PM
    this is beautiful Constance, the imagery is awesome, good luck in the contest....

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
    just love this, my friend. congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:33:00 PM
    'suddenly the was sinking...' such a luvly line here. i greatly luv this piece.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 6:01:00 PM
    I was taken to this place of serenity for a while...and enjoyed the beautiful scenery too, Constance! So glad to be reading you once again. I've missed you. Best of luck in the contest. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:36:00 PM
    This is such a beautiful write my friend, I really enjoyed the clever and ingenious poem! What a fully delightful piece, I loved reading this poem this evening! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 2:42:00 PM
    A lovely poem for contest Constance. Wish you luck - hope your will win. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)