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Empty Without You

It’s me and the four walls again….. The house is dead silent without the exhibit of your infectious excitement, which made my sunset brighter, and my breakfast much more tastier My heart writhed in pain when you left in the rain to pick up a bullet-train, which even added echoes of our Love in my mind These echoes have taken me to an asylum once, but not twice Managing to prove my “sanity” to my psychiatrist, I managed to get back into our old, same house again and sit at a corner of a room, rewinding our beautiful moments that we cherished in my mind over and over again like a broken stereo The four walls are a witness of my love for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/16/2016 10:57:00 PM
Teddy. Congrats on your great win.... LINDA
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/18/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda!!! *^_^*
Date: 4/13/2016 12:56:00 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/14/2016 4:34:00 AM
Welcome, Anytime!! ;-) Thanks for your applause!!! *^_^* <3
Date: 11/13/2014 8:59:00 AM
beautiful imagery, congrats on the win
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/14/2014 2:38:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 11/13/2014 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/14/2014 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Brenda! :-)
Date: 11/12/2014 3:39:00 PM
oh so deep and sad with very powerfu imagery - many congrats on your win Teddy :-) Hugs jan x
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Jan! I appreciate your kind words! ^_^

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