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My life's great sorrow, no namesake to carry on. Pages of my book empty. Shards of my glass heart, pierced deep into childless grief. Drown in my sea of regret. By Deb Wilson for "Sedoka me any subject" contest sponsored by Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 8:52:00 PM
DEB... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this lovely, melancholic write! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:29:00 AM
Poignant!! I am so touched by this writing, Deb. Congrats on your win with this fine piece.. some day I might tell how I'm very closely associated with your subject here. love dear
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:38:00 AM
soup mailing, deb....
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:30:00 AM
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:25:00 AM
Deb, happy to see this one on the list :) Congratulations on your win, love Wilma
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:28:00 AM
A deep write by you Deb.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:03:00 PM
special congrats to you, dear deb.. wow! :) huggs!
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:53:00 PM
congrats Deb on a super first place win for an amazing Sedoka luv..
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Date: 2/28/2012 6:22:00 PM
Hey Deb...this one is so emotional and piercing to my heart. You definately got my emotions stirred up with this winning poem. Congrats on a well thot sedoka. Russell's contests are always so much fun! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2012 9:16:00 AM
A very emotive piece Deb, wishing you all the best with Russell's contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:07:00 PM
Nice write! I can feel this one,for the thoughts have poked at me thru life.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:03:00 PM
Very deep write girl. You intend to write what iv been wanting to read for a while now, and I don't read much. So thank you dear. Roman.
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