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Empty Jars

Empty things-

Empty rooms-filled with things-
Empty vases-empty jars
Empty seats-
Cupboards that are bare-

Corridors-in my mind-
Long and narrow-alone I stare-
Vacant land -
You once – were there!  


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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Congratulations Victoria x

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Brenda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/29/2012 12:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Reading this easily places vivid images in my mind.

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your win my friend, bl

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 7:39:00 PM
    wow, I would have rated this one higher. It's unique and I love what you are saying here. Congrats on your win, Brenda!!

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:02:00 PM
    So glad to see a wonderful mind like yours share the podium. Great goin' Brenda, Craig

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Brenda congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
    congrats Brenda on a splendid win for superb poetry on jars theme luv..

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 12:01:00 PM
    I like this Brenda. I would have scored it higher. Congratulations