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Empty Eyes

There was nothing but emptiness in his eyes It was like he didn’t have a soul He hid it well like wearing a disguise She looked at him and saw two black holes It was like he didn’t have a soul He stared through her like she was nothing She looked at him and saw two black holes His empty stare had her heart bumping He stared through her like she was nothing He hid it well like wearing a disguise His empty stare had her heart bumping There was nothing but emptiness in his eyes

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Date: 3/1/2015 5:00:00 PM
Powerful write, and I like the pantoum form, though I haven't tried it yet. Thanks for sharing!
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