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Empty Bottle, Empty Soul

There is nothing worse than staring at an empty bottle, Figuring out there it has more substance than your moral values. Nothing more than the all-encompassing emptiness: The deafening silence Peering through the veil of ignorance, Unknowing of even who you are; Not that anyone will notice you, Much less remember. As you crawl upon this earth, And shrink back inside. The shroud surrounding you Covers all to see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/28/2014 2:15:00 AM
Beautifully put.. excellent pen
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Date: 12/28/2014 1:50:00 AM
Nice creation I enjoyed much dear poet Collins.Wishes. -Safa
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